Number one of my little series of illustrations based on music. Music is part of my inspirations so a little tribute to them. Thank you humanity for creating such wonder!!
Anyway, compared to the previous versions I pushed the color navy out more, like an indigo theme, to go with a classical yet digital feeling to it. Sounds exist anywhere, which reminded me of cells, which made me think of iodine dye, so yea. My train of thought is a bit screwy but all is good amirite?
"What ' previous' versions?" you ask? Check out: [link]
Very beautiful drawing and nicely colored, I like how the lines variate from being thin and thick. Kinda remains me of a song called 'My ear's candy' :3
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Courage is the art of being the only one who knows you're scared to death.
Huh never heard the song before... I shall check it out!
And thank you much!! I think the line art and the colors clash too much... like each of it's fighting over dominance.
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear! If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here! If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
I like this alot, especially the lining. Also, I like his dreamy expression -although his eyelid is so far down that he looks a bit lazy. I liked seeing the improvement chart, too. As the previous commenter said, you could experiment with lightning a little more
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In weakness is God's power accomplished ( Psalm 27)
Glad you liked it! I thought the lines were a bit too thick on the face but hm. I shall experiment moar, including the lighting! Thank you for the complement and motivation!
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear! If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here! If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
Lovely! I really enjoy the lineweight here. My only "complaints" would be the his neck looks a tad bit skinny, even for a young boy. Also, there's this slight bit of light coming from the back that's only really perceptible on the hoodie and not on his hair. If there's a secondary light source that's shining, play it up! :"D
Thank you for your input! It helps me a lot I appreciate it
I tend to draw very slinky, skinny figures by default, and usually the skinny neck balances that out I thought, but do u think a more proportionately thick neck would go well with it?
And I shall play up the lighting more! Thanks for the encouragement!
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear! If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here! If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
I don't think you need to go like... Hulk-thick-neck on him XD He just needs a slight bit more on the back of his neck there since it doesn't quite look like it'd hold his head up well :")
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Courage is the art of being the only one who knows you're scared to death.
And thank you much!! I think the line art and the colors clash too much... like each of it's fighting over dominance.
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear!
If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here!
If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
~Integral
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In weakness is God's power accomplished ( Psalm 27)
I thought the lines were a bit too thick on the face but hm. I shall experiment moar, including the lighting! Thank you for the complement and motivation!
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear!
If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here!
If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
~Integral
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I tend to draw very slinky, skinny figures by default, and usually the skinny neck balances that out I thought, but do u think a more proportionately thick neck would go well with it?
And I shall play up the lighting more! Thanks for the encouragement!
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If you've done nothing wrong, you've got nothing to fear!
If you've got something to hide, you shouldn't even be here!
If you've changed your mind, I'm afraid it's too late!
~Integral
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